Henry Denander

At the doctor's -


I am glad that I was 43 when

our son was born and not

23.


I am wiser now and more

relaxed and

I have a lot of time for him.


But it's harder to play football and

crawl on the floor with Legos when you are

older.


My son is six now and I had to take him to

the doctor because he had a

throat infection.

There is a doctor nearby and

we have been there before.


When we walk into the doctor's office,

she looks over her glasses and

says


-Hi William! You have your Grandfather with you

today?


When I protest she puts on her glasses and is

really embarrassed and

apologizes and says that she

didn't really see without her glasses on.


She is a couple of years older than I am and

she starts telling me about

her grandchildren.


Everything gets sorted out and she examines

William and he gets his medicine but

she is still a little

embarrassed when we leave.


It will probably be easy getting appointments and

prescriptions on short notice in the future. She will

remember us.


I hope she is not planning

her retirement too soon.




For my editor -



Since I am Swedish I need someone to go through my English

stories and poems so there are no mistakes that will make the

reader laugh at the wrong place.


I have the very good fortune of getting help from an old friend

from America who is a much published writer & poet. He reads

through my stuff and suggests small changes here and there,

correcting my Swedish approach to English.


He says there are only minor changes but for me they are vital

and I couldn't do without his help.


I just read that Raymond Carver's editor claimed that he was the

one that actually wrote all of Carver's prose, because of all the

changes he made to the text.


I don't think that my editor will say this but his influence has

been great.


And, when writing poems about your family and friends you

always run the risk of criticism and that someone will get upset

or be offended, so it's good to be able to share the blame:


-Well, you know my editor, he has helped me a lot with my

writing and he actually suggested I should write it like this…."

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