Thunder Sandwich #16
Cherry Hill by Haze McElhenny
    1 Poem by
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    (untitled)

    stuck under the wheel
    changing tires to donuts back to tires
    through the same empty car wash
    for months before you find out
    there's a half hour wait.
    Anabasis in the sun
    like some old skinny man determined
    to have everything in order before he's up,
    this way there is no wasted time
    throwing out empty bags and half-smoked cigarettes
    at the vacuum which is a mere u-turn from your last spray,
    but he's down as the cars factory in one more
    and he's only two away,
    eight minutes at least without time for quarterly deposits
    and he makes a dash to the trash
    with a handful of glass bottles
    and unread newspapers with the crosswords ripped out and undone
    and one more link through as he rushes to his wheel.
    One down and one to go
    as he moves just five feet from carnuba heaven
    but there's so much to do and you know how that goes
    and he pleads to anything that may help him
    that this woman is the same kind of anal-retentive washer
    that he is himself and will make sure that the car
    is shining like cartoon smiles so he can finish
    his pre-wash in time.
    And he drools as the brushes spin
    and he only for a split hair-second notices that
    the redneck's white shirt has become damp as her red hair
    in the steam and foam through the grates
    and as he pushes on the eternal smudge he puts
    his palm through the glass
    and he can't believe the mess he's made
    his blue chamois spotted red as his seats,
    the wet redhead pulling out
    and he can only cry over his schedule
    because he'll never catch up now
    and I can only pass him my dirty reusable 75c chamois
    and go back to my car to laugh.



    (untitled)

    He imagines he's in a movie
    as each passerby becomes an extra
    each turn of the corner a new song
    plays in his head and he frowns
    and squints accordingly
    because the walks in this town
    allow for each emotion
    and a 90 minute mix tape of cool music.
    And he pats the tail end of a big gray buick
    and waves hello to the old crazy
    that he knows by name
    and after a few minutes of chewing the fat
    he realizes that this will be the sad end of his movie.
    He's not on his way to a big meeting,
    not with a woman,
    not with a gangster,
    not even a friend.
    Only out to pick up the car that he was too drunk
    to drive home the night before
    and as he unlocks the door and blows on his hands
    and the tape starts and he realizes he has no place to go.
    So he imagines himself doing jobs
    and driving everywhere in town
    where he knows he knows someone.
    And five songs into his 90 minutes he realizes
    he hasn't even finished the tape
    and he hasn't heard a song in nearly two whole minutes.

    Thunder Sandwich
    ISSN: 1534-4037
Edited By Jim Chandler & Haze McElhenny
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